i like that my life
allows me to say
with my heart
let the river
carry me
under the trees
let
my body
be a hollowed log
carried
from
eddie to whorl
and
let me
drift
under a sky
scattered
by branches and leaves
let me feel
this quiet river
broken
into tiny ripples
on the bark
of my passing
twigs and branches
dragging like fingers
and let me
drift
forever onwards
turning
and shaping
and feeling
and being
this tiny space
whole and alone
entirely connected
to the all of everything
in the little universe
of my knowing
14 comments:
steven: canuck Rumi
Did you read my mind?
I'm not sure I could trust the water to carry me - I'd be afraid of sinking! Lovely thoughts though.
Following up on Dan's comment:
the golden fish: everyday epiphanies from the canuck Rumi
I forgot what I intended to say after I read Dan's comment. I have a feeling this might stick steven. You Canuck Rumi ...
Loved your word stream.
The Rumi analogy is not out of place Steven, or exaggerated. He would be pleased with what he finds here.
When I was guiding on the river, sometimes making and breaking camp was so much work I wondered why I did it. then, canoe packed, I would push off into the current and remember.
Absolutely beautiful! (sigh)
I'm late home tonight Steven with little time to blog, but I find I look out for your blog especially among others. To me it measures the passing of each day.
It's nourishing.
Perfectly, perfectly said. I am drifting just from reading the words.
Those branches are looking mighty green, Steven. Summer is coming!
That makes me want to fashion a Huck Finn raft and float down the river. Cool!
hello my bloggy chums! - english by birth - in fact my body is entirely english. my mind - well i'd link it to canada. my heart - english. my soul - well i first met sufi's at a showing of the film of gurdjieff's "meetings with remarkable men". it has been outwards inwards upwards downwards inside out since then. my soul belongs to the love that connects all things known and unknown. sacred and otherwise. everything that is, could be should be, would be, will be, has been, might be, wants to be. here i am. thankyou so much. steven
Words and thoughts superb!
this is beautiful... have had a wander around your space... a lovely place to come to!
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