Thursday, November 10, 2011

rain on unshuttered windows

woodblock print hasui kawase "bell tower in the rain at okayama"





i see you coming down the street

the suddenness
of a door opening

i close the window




4 comments:

JJ Roa Rodriguez said...

Made me think Sir Steven... Love these lines...

JJRod'z

steven said...

hey jj! it's a moment. when what should open the moment, closes it. steven

Valerianna said...

Sir Steven - My, have you been KNIGHTED! You didn't tell! I love these lines - they are like a landscape that continues outside of the canvas - a whole story unfolded for me as I imagined who was closing the window, where they were, etc, etc. I love word-journeys.... I wonder - who opens the door? I thought, wind, cause the print about is rainy. Or person? Mystery......

steven said...

oh valerianna didn't i tell you?! yes the queen of hearts baked me some tarts and threw in a knighhood as a bonus prize! this scene pulled me into a very personal moment that i feel entirely in my body and then through my emotions and then into the very rest of me. steven