the golden fish: relationship

Sunday, March 27, 2011

relationship

the sharp edges

of our crossed purposes

are so often hidden

behind the shield

of good intentions

visual prompt provided by tess kincaid

17 comments:

Helen said...: Spot on ... you took aim ... hit the target ... square in the middle. Bulls eye.; March 27, 2011 at 2:14 AM
The Weaver of Grass said...: How true! How true!; March 27, 2011 at 4:33 AM
R. Burnett Baker said...: OOOH, good one, Steven! I like your take on the prompt!

Rick; March 27, 2011 at 6:48 AM
Elizabeth said...: Good one, Steve.
Sharp and to the point. (Horrible sort of pun!)
Still cold here too.; March 27, 2011 at 7:40 AM
Reya Mellicker said...: Ouch.

This is the very reason I kind of love being single!; March 27, 2011 at 8:08 AM
Ruth said...: As I get older I realize that good intentions are a shield for my co-dependence: needing the other to be helped by me. What a lot you packed into this haiku-esque poem, Steven. I like your take on the prompt.; March 27, 2011 at 8:44 AM
Linda Sue said...: That certainly packed a punch- Genius! so concise, universal-nail on the head!; March 27, 2011 at 10:21 AM
ellen abbott said...: oh steven. short and to the point.; March 27, 2011 at 11:11 AM
The Blog of Bee said...: A brilliant take. The reality of life.; March 27, 2011 at 11:21 AM
Jinksy said...: Only a deep thinker could have come up with this gem...; March 27, 2011 at 12:12 PM
Lisa Ursu said...: Jinksy's words are perfect!
A GEM!; March 27, 2011 at 12:38 PM
Friko said...: are you speaking from experience?

I must say, I've come across this thought once or twice myself.; March 27, 2011 at 7:01 PM
steven said...: oh friko - i only speak from experience!!!! steven; March 27, 2011 at 7:11 PM
DebbyMc said...: Fantastic! I love this.; March 27, 2011 at 11:26 PM
Arian Tejano said...: wisdom at its finest weaving.; March 28, 2011 at 4:15 AM
Tess Kincaid said...: Brilliant, Steven. I love when you hop into Magpie with your beauty and wisdom. x; March 28, 2011 at 8:24 AM
steven said...: kind visitors, thankyou for your kind and generous comments! i love when words tumble out so simply and filled with unbidden experience based observations!!! i just sit back and wonder sometimes. steven; March 28, 2011 at 6:21 PM

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