i've dreamed enough dreams
of my self
floating
drifting
being carried
down a river
i've swum up them and down them
been pulled to the bottom
and come up gasping for air
i know the metaphor
but being dealt a metaphor
and becoming it
is another thing altogether
~
for me the richest feature
of the living metaphor
are the islands
make your way out to them
and islands
become
vantage points
places to stop
and consider
what has gone before
and what might be becoming
19 comments:
Even the smallest island is a refuge... beautiful photos and words. I will look for islands now
pauline - yes refuges, vantage points, waystations . . . . these photos are on one of my bike rides. i follow a river for half the ride and really honestly, i have to really watch it as there's the road and then there's the river and i find it hard to decide which i'd rather watch!!!! steven
An island is a place on which to rest, as much as a vantage point, a place at which to stop. Thanks Steven.
The trick is keeping your head above water.
Enchanting!
I come from Friko's blog and found your link in her favourites. Your words and your pictures are very inspiring and spiritual. Nice to be here, dear Steven! Wow!
Renée
Envious of this view. I would have crashed my bike right away or always stopping to get a better look.
I agree with Pauline beautiful words and photos.
cheers, parsnip
island...
yes, that sounds good
unto myself
unmoving
a refuge
a stopping place
for the sun
yes..I could be that
watch the road!
I love the sentiments here and the way this is portrayed. Awesome work.
Ah yes..islands!Life's rafts and lifeboats.Lovely post!
hello von and welcome!!! the metaphors around water and our passge on and through it are rich! thanks for adding a couple more here. steven
hey okie thankyou very much! that's very generous! steven
hey suz - cool poetry comment. thankyou so much. steven
well parsnip i wish i could take each picture i frame in my mind's eye as i ride. really i do. you'd be amazed. really amazed. i hope to figure something out one day that will catch exactly what i see. steven
renee- welcome from friko's place. her blog is brilliant and beautiful. i love visiting there. thankyou for your kind comment. steven
valerianna it's amazing what there is to see in the small palces i visit. amazing!!! thankyou for visiting. steven
willow - there are times of the year as a teacher where that is 99 % of the battle. i'm entering one of those phases as i write!!! steven
elisabeth - i've dreamed for a very long time of a cabin on an island. a place to rest, to remember everything i hold most valued. especially a place to create. steven
My whole life I dreamed of en island,to live and be an island especially to have those wonderful,long walks along the beaches if island allow it all around it! Beautiful words and visuals,thank you!
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