the golden fish: voice

Thursday, February 16, 2012

the light is falling

thin and cold

so like the emptiness

of metal

until the words

"are you coming?"

soft and orange and convincing

as any i've ever heard

Elisabeth said...: The gold orange of the ducks and the ice blue of the water provide a powerful backdrop to these words, Steven. I recognise their convincing aspect, persuasive forceful or just plain inviting, 'are you coming' along too.; February 16, 2012 at 12:54 AM
JJ Roa Rodriguez said...: Nice pics and nice write...

JJrod'z; February 16, 2012 at 6:00 PM
erin said...: yes, i was laughing at the orange ducks and how they made me feel, called upon.)

xo
erin; February 16, 2012 at 10:32 PM
Kay said...: hi steven, beautiful words i esp. like 'the emptiness of metal'....x; February 17, 2012 at 3:10 AM