ha linda sue . . . so awesome to come back home half-lit. that was on my schedule for last night also but . . . . i felt a pang of conscience and came home to . . . . everybody out!!! ha!!!! i have no idea what made this strange shape int he snow but maybe a small angel come to earth . . .steven
valerianna - it was the size of a hand - tip of finger to little wrinkles on the wrist. the words came afte realizing that sometimes, some things happen or appear or simply are . . . because they are and to go for more or to try and squeeze more from them, is unreasonable. steven
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I so love how you, your poems, hit me in the middle!
Yeah, want to look back do not...might ...want...more...
never mind! keep going, fly!
oh, and is that a snow covered ...wrench???
I am half lit- just back form a wine soaked party...
That wrench looks sort of like a molar.
ha linda sue . . . so awesome to come back home half-lit. that was on my schedule for last night also but . . . . i felt a pang of conscience and came home to . . . . everybody out!!! ha!!!! i have no idea what made this strange shape int he snow but maybe a small angel come to earth . . .steven
Fascinating snow-angel! The writing is like a snippet from some mythic journey - maybe the sirens are after you here?
Oh, Steven! This is one of my favorites! So much implied, remembered, experienced, feared, suggested, and left undone. Life is always left undone.....
Love this!
Rick
Heartrending. Your words tear at the soul in their desperation and desolation. Such simple words evoking so much, Steven.
If you have time, visit my Frday post - thanks!
You've inspired my latest!! Thanks!
funny, on first read I read that the narrator was fearful of being asked for more
The photo reminds me of a fallen angel for some reason.
valerianna - it was the size of a hand - tip of finger to little wrinkles on the wrist. the words came afte realizing that sometimes, some things happen or appear or simply are . . . because they are and to go for more or to try and squeeze more from them, is unreasonable. steven
rick thankyou!!!! very much! undone life is real . . . steven
suz wow that flips the piece inside out for me!!! steven
tabor and that was my inclination at first also . . . steven
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