Friday, October 14, 2011

fallen leaf


beneath the surface
of your fading skin
the slow pulse
of a year's stories

16 comments:

R. Burnett Baker said...

Fantastic image, but one that tells more than a year's stories. Actually, I identify with that fading skin... :)

Rick

Elisabeth said...

The dried veins in the leaf's skin catch my eye. You're right, Steven, they could tell a year's stories.

Rachel Fenton said...

Oh, that's sad because there's only a little time to hear them...

steven said...

rick - i'm watching my body change. it's fifty four and a bit years old now and of course it's been changing since i was born but i didn't really watch . . . until now. steven

steven said...

elisabeth - i would love to hear some of those stories so that i could retell them as they really are experienced by this leaf. steven

steven said...

rachel a lot of the leaves are going silent as i write. steven

erin said...

an important photograph, i think. how the ridges cut so deeply. one year, you say? seems like countless.

this reminds me of the surprising last line in william michaelian's poem, revolution, found here: http://recently-banned-literature.blogspot.com/2011/10/revolution.html and of course, this reminds me of the martha wilson piece i just wrote of and referenced, too.

there is so much to be gained in the acceptance of our fading.

xo
erin

ellen abbott said...

Nice!

Valerianna said...

Oooo, it IS so skin like... stunning image....

JJ Roa Rodriguez said...

being a caregiver for nearly 7 years now, I have seen the beauty beyond the wrinkles, beyond the sagging skin. As I help my clients rub lotion on their skin, the story that they tell me about the past is what count the best. And they have taught me a lot of lessons. That while I am still young, I have to do what can make me happy without stepping on someone's toes, so I can lessen if not avoid regret any part of my youth. At my age now, 41, some may say young but I am starting to see changes, esp my eyes...

I love this Sir!

JJRod'z

steven said...

erin thanks so much for the link. this is what i found there that swept my soul off: "and oh, how i love the autumn — this colorful leaf i am, soon to die, soon to be swept aside, even as the browned fiber of me yearns for the next life, and the next, and the next, eloquent food for worms." steven

steven said...

ellen thanks. steven

steven said...

valerianna - the leaf was alone at a time of year when leaves are rarely alone. but for that i might not have noticed it. steven

steven said...

jj you are such a good man! steven

Ruth said...

Perception and awareness make the moments of my life extraordinary. That's what I appreciate here.

steven said...

ruth - thankyou for that. steven