triangles of light;
soft fractals
of a sun
i watch
climb across
a milky blue threadbare sky
a sky
as washed-out
and thin
as old sheets
light
falls
on autumn's dried husks
also
fallen
on the winter blue
of a river pebble
a morning kiss
for reya and jo
16 comments:
Beautiful verse, elegant in its simplicity, much like the natural light of which it speaks. I love the photograph.
Noelle
This rock reminds me of a blue moon. Lovely.
Who wouldn't want a morning kiss like this to greet them?!
noelle!! lovely to see you! thankyou for the kind comment. steven
a sky as washed-out and thin as old sheets
A delicious morning kiss.
beautiful photograph steven.
your experiments with blue are working beautifully.
Your words, as always, a poem.
The images knock me out (in the softest, gentlest kind of way).
How sensual with the threadbare sky and thin old sheets, that cold winter blue warmed by a morning kiss. A beautiful juxtaposition.
Mesmerizing, Steven.
Wow. How ... how do you do it Steven? Wow.
A morning, afternoon and evening kiss to you!
Exquisite imagery, Steven. You capture the beauty of the approaching Winter perfectly.
May I now boast that a man has written poetry for me? Maybe some day, after I've brought it to dwell privately inside my heart for a time.
What happiness you've brought my way today...thank you!
I really like this writing - and photo - strange, fairy blue!
reya thanks . . . thanks . . . and thanks again!!! steven
jo that's crazy talk!!! surely to goodness a man has put his words on paper for you. happiness - well, it's like music isn't it. it's always available and good and loving and so wishes to be a part of us. steven
amazing, splendid writing.
keep it up.
I am your follower, welcome follow us back.
hope to see you at our week 11 potluck tonight.
we are open Sunday, American central time 8pm and remain open until Wednesday 8am.
any poems are welcome,
linking in early would be of most beneficial to have your work read and commented by fellow participants.
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