tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post8928639914208003858..comments2023-10-24T09:29:32.492-04:00Comments on the golden fish: caressing the lesserstevenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-56782097926243087412011-06-01T04:55:08.419-04:002011-06-01T04:55:08.419-04:00Your musings, words and gentle treading are echoin...Your musings, words and gentle treading are echoing in the gardens and thoughts of all who read you today, Steven.Lorenzo — Alchemist's Pillowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07522265816460154722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-72982020137186814072011-05-31T21:54:56.013-04:002011-05-31T21:54:56.013-04:00valerianna - so much of what i value now has been ...valerianna - so much of what i value now has been conscribed to the insignificant as it took place so long ago. i am in wonder at your magical recollection. stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-84291331519434086342011-05-31T21:35:19.436-04:002011-05-31T21:35:19.436-04:00Our house growing up had two amazing Japanese cher...Our house growing up had two amazing Japanese cherry trees right outside. Spring flower-snow was really something! Your words and images brought that back...Valeriannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621130622153365184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-16845025580924104732011-05-31T19:05:53.814-04:002011-05-31T19:05:53.814-04:00reya - some of these writings write themselves and...reya - some of these writings write themselves and this was one. i can take little credit really. from the instant i saw the petals to the moment this post was upped was one long seamless piece. i can only stand back and wonder. writing helps make me understand the human condition so much better. stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-84902858704441194832011-05-31T18:46:56.769-04:002011-05-31T18:46:56.769-04:00That was really sweet. So touching.That was really sweet. So touching.Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-36810929776867291432011-05-31T14:33:10.755-04:002011-05-31T14:33:10.755-04:00I certainly savored the wholeness of this beautifu...I certainly savored the wholeness of this beautiful post. xTess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-68910370683296768292011-05-31T12:12:42.759-04:002011-05-31T12:12:42.759-04:00"...the ray splayed and perfumed"
ohmyg..."...the ray splayed and perfumed"<br /><br />ohmygoodnessgracious. <br /><br />Lovely, lovely, lovely.<br /><br />I want to lay face down on that soft sweet carpet and breathe it all in.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14937847762010497687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-49044096836164208082011-05-31T09:31:18.121-04:002011-05-31T09:31:18.121-04:00Lovely sentiment & stated so well. If only we ...Lovely sentiment & stated so well. If only we could tiptoe across our wonderful earth. Thank you Steven; this may be my favorite of your poems.Cheryl Catohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13294358830518520566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-85746278378080073832011-05-31T07:56:53.433-04:002011-05-31T07:56:53.433-04:00I felt like a rainbow reading this poem this morni...I felt like a rainbow reading this poem this morning (exactly the perfect moment to take it in) because I was smiling but my eyes teared up at the same time. <br /><br />You help me be more human every day, STeven. Thank you.Reya Mellickerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13076092659507965666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-17433807163225010122011-05-31T07:39:00.719-04:002011-05-31T07:39:00.719-04:00ruth thankyou very much. stevenruth thankyou very much. stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-68936265139794549982011-05-31T07:27:10.899-04:002011-05-31T07:27:10.899-04:00This poem is so beautiful. I copuld enter right in...This poem is so beautiful. I copuld enter right into it and savour each moment and thought as the words appeared before me.<br /><br />Don't ever stop writing!!agujahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15857809123531088629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-36004356488154751282011-05-31T07:09:50.408-04:002011-05-31T07:09:50.408-04:00A tremendous response to those petals you found, a...A tremendous response to those petals you found, a bouquet of experience gathered up as a whole that is more than the sum of its parts. Gorgeous dance of words.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-67871060589909578372011-05-31T06:45:35.130-04:002011-05-31T06:45:35.130-04:00friko thankyou. i came across these petals on a la...friko thankyou. i came across these petals on a lawn that i flashed past on my bicycle. i heard the little voice say "go back" and so i did. the lawn was immaculate. too much so. while the petals were in varying states of flush fulsomeness and decay. it was hard not to sit down in their midst!!! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-74595445888093595992011-05-31T06:38:19.040-04:002011-05-31T06:38:19.040-04:00your words and the delicate petals blend into each...your words and the delicate petals blend into each other beautifully.<br />this is one of your best.Frikohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04277167831642088694noreply@blogger.com