tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post8528040753335937748..comments2023-10-24T09:29:32.492-04:00Comments on the golden fish: the holy othernessstevenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-16468147296786084822012-04-20T03:57:51.734-04:002012-04-20T03:57:51.734-04:00Your last two lines say it loud ,for all of us. ♥Your last two lines say it loud ,for all of us. ♥Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-73079141053059245152012-04-18T17:24:02.622-04:002012-04-18T17:24:02.622-04:00Loved this "the tumbled togetherness of my an...Loved this "the tumbled togetherness of my ancestors<br />inside the me of this steven person" - loved all of it!<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-33969757906248847502012-04-18T08:20:59.397-04:002012-04-18T08:20:59.397-04:00Lovely gentle flowing words. Reminds me of the Run...Lovely gentle flowing words. Reminds me of the Rune , OthalaSilent Otto https://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-83028120378666477902012-04-17T19:31:48.495-04:002012-04-17T19:31:48.495-04:00You've made this poem intimate and I like how ...You've made this poem intimate and I like how you made that link - for your past and your present.Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-81355135765112655882012-04-17T18:48:03.825-04:002012-04-17T18:48:03.825-04:00hello carrie . . . i beleive they do . . . and i i...hello carrie . . . i beleive they do . . . and i in their becoming. as i represent the future to them, they were bound to press the hands of the present into the reaching back hands of the future!! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-70406324538263575682012-04-17T18:47:13.016-04:002012-04-17T18:47:13.016-04:00helen . . . . each day is so very like that . . ....helen . . . . each day is so very like that . . . filled to the brim of my selfness . . . stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-74742454971758855352012-04-17T18:46:44.891-04:002012-04-17T18:46:44.891-04:00tess! it is lovely to have you here. gifts . . .a ...tess! it is lovely to have you here. gifts . . .a day of gifts!!! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-65681330747702468492012-04-17T18:46:20.524-04:002012-04-17T18:46:20.524-04:00rick - i love the idea of all the people who have ...rick - i love the idea of all the people who have goine into opening the many doors of this place up for me to emerge into it, having some modicom of presence in my life. i love that you add the layer of worthiness! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-81032494311316380112012-04-17T18:45:13.247-04:002012-04-17T18:45:13.247-04:00sueann thankyou for your kind and resonant words!!...sueann thankyou for your kind and resonant words!!!! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-42770340202601202392012-04-17T18:44:53.629-04:002012-04-17T18:44:53.629-04:00kay, i very admire chagall's work and this one...kay, i very admire chagall's work and this one has so many timely images for me that i lost my way inside it. i could wish that my writing was more focussed and considered but the exercise is as much about slam poetry as it is about being clever!!!! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-1377713122172196902012-04-17T14:53:06.300-04:002012-04-17T14:53:06.300-04:00Love the thoughts and truths in this beautiful poe...Love the thoughts and truths in this beautiful poem! Our ancestors do play a great part in what we become ourselves. :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-45954537272844284662012-04-17T12:24:56.622-04:002012-04-17T12:24:56.622-04:00... filled to the brim of my selfness ... can'...... filled to the brim of my selfness ... can't stop thinking about that! Wonderful, your Magpie.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-684995102139281352012-04-17T12:22:10.885-04:002012-04-17T12:22:10.885-04:00The tumbled togetherness of my ancestors...oh I lo...The tumbled togetherness of my ancestors...oh I love that...and that Steven person, too...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-44929607921362425622012-04-17T12:04:18.354-04:002012-04-17T12:04:18.354-04:00This brings comfort with the hope that "ances...This brings comfort with the hope that "ancestors inside the me..." are watching and guiding. I want that to be so, but I want to be worthy of those others......<br /><br />Beautiful interpretation!R. Burnett Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08743367086298298786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-1698219548913988872012-04-17T10:39:32.932-04:002012-04-17T10:39:32.932-04:00I too believe in flowers that sing...and doors ope...I too believe in flowers that sing...and doors opening by others for me!<br />Your poems sings beautifully<br />Hugs<br />SueAvidersio fleassisnnSueannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05299288406218968621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-25025995450871728542012-04-17T02:59:19.679-04:002012-04-17T02:59:19.679-04:00every considered word you have written here is a j...every considered word you have written here is a joy..i esp. like 'flowers that sing'...i work with flowers every day and their singing transient beauty is why i do it!!!..xxKayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16584116146098939783noreply@blogger.com