tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post6747340870004087103..comments2023-10-24T09:29:32.492-04:00Comments on the golden fish: washed ashorestevenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-33470833842129452012011-01-15T19:21:03.787-05:002011-01-15T19:21:03.787-05:00thankyou gerry!!thankyou gerry!!stevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-33484664235028819492011-01-15T19:01:36.816-05:002011-01-15T19:01:36.816-05:00nice!nice!gerry boydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08404762839765626232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-91947658808577178042011-01-15T14:32:27.638-05:002011-01-15T14:32:27.638-05:00pauline - same here!!! stevenpauline - same here!!! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-19460371575500787222011-01-15T14:31:46.462-05:002011-01-15T14:31:46.462-05:00dulce - i think you can be that moon if you wish. ...dulce - i think you can be that moon if you wish. you know better than most the powers of imagination!!! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-9066043189667661112011-01-15T14:30:21.920-05:002011-01-15T14:30:21.920-05:00I'd like to be that Moon looking down what you...I'd like to be that Moon looking down what you describe so perfectly, steven!Dulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-37333214183451446652011-01-15T14:14:08.125-05:002011-01-15T14:14:08.125-05:00I always come away from here with new ways to look...I always come away from here with new ways to look at ordinary things :)Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-36965520651520756452011-01-15T13:02:12.774-05:002011-01-15T13:02:12.774-05:00jo i thought of a lot of mums and grandma's as...jo i thought of a lot of mums and grandma's as i wrote this one! i wish your mum well jo. stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-85741164898537028772011-01-15T13:00:46.084-05:002011-01-15T13:00:46.084-05:00tess thankyou very much. it's funny how someti...tess thankyou very much. it's funny how sometimes you can be inside an idea or an observation and it's just there. stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-78822887491591344002011-01-15T12:38:08.740-05:002011-01-15T12:38:08.740-05:00I feel the gentleness of a sky that "lays sof...I feel the gentleness of a sky that "lays softly upon her weathered wooden mouth."<br /><br />Sweet maternal sky. No matter how many countless waves have blurred the body, she's there for us.<br /><br />Not sure why, but I'm thinking (with great love and a bit of pain) of my elderly ailing mother as I read and reread this poem.<br /><br />Thank you for the peace it brings.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14937847762010497687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-15475948497949269002011-01-15T12:03:20.367-05:002011-01-15T12:03:20.367-05:00Gorgeous bit of writing, Steven. One of your best....Gorgeous bit of writing, Steven. One of your best. My WT is always dragging up beautiful driftwood from the river, Mother Nature's art.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-44555479483486876322011-01-15T10:29:51.146-05:002011-01-15T10:29:51.146-05:00ruth - i believe that the voices that comprise thi...ruth - i believe that the voices that comprise this world are available to anyone with ears for listening and not simply hearing. as i grow older i'm blessed to meet more and more people for whom this is the case. thankyou for your thoughtful comment ruth. thankyou also for the gift of your blog. stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-60312008470721792152011-01-15T10:19:43.428-05:002011-01-15T10:19:43.428-05:00It takes a person of immense life and connection t...It takes a person of immense life and connection to hear and understand the wordless whispers of a weathered, long-journeyed log. This touches me.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-81716771802347193092011-01-15T10:12:03.725-05:002011-01-15T10:12:03.725-05:00reya - i spent some time next to her. i imagined t...reya - i spent some time next to her. i imagined the journey. such a long time spent growing and then her journey in the water to this point where she rests and listens to stories and tells those of her own. stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-8127310272760419782011-01-15T10:11:09.763-05:002011-01-15T10:11:09.763-05:00robert - there it was - as soft and smooth as skin...robert - there it was - as soft and smooth as skin an old, very old log washed ashore. thankyou for your kind comment! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-16195922695907349172011-01-15T08:57:21.518-05:002011-01-15T08:57:21.518-05:00I see her, definitely!I see her, definitely!Reya Mellickerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13076092659507965666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-91353736868974725372011-01-15T08:43:59.098-05:002011-01-15T08:43:59.098-05:00beautiful words
"she holds her thoughts
like ...beautiful words<br />"she holds her thoughts<br />like sheets pulled up"<br /><br />to a stunning photograph.<br /><br />~robertall ways 11 o'clockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08768261761650923716noreply@blogger.com