tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post4847831344924099506..comments2023-10-24T09:29:32.492-04:00Comments on the golden fish: a sudden flurrystevenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-10113016753335173802011-06-09T20:14:19.425-04:002011-06-09T20:14:19.425-04:00Love-love-love "eddies and whorls".Love-love-love "eddies and whorls".Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-74768985990461791732011-06-08T22:01:09.825-04:002011-06-08T22:01:09.825-04:00hope - even in the darkest passage there are shado...hope - even in the darkest passage there are shadows or shades which suggests light. it's there. stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-77925942277329846992011-06-08T21:59:40.212-04:002011-06-08T21:59:40.212-04:00dan - i can write about how i get to the writing. ...dan - i can write about how i get to the writing. maybe if i do that i can articulate what happens during the writing. i can feel it when i am writing but i've not really thought about the words that describe it. i'll see what i can do dan and thankyou so much for your supportive comment. it carries a lot of presence for me. stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-87506993363204174032011-06-08T21:58:09.443-04:002011-06-08T21:58:09.443-04:00aguja - i'm not entirely sure how it happens b...aguja - i'm not entirely sure how it happens but it does so i'm glad and i feel very fortunate. stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-57658772806385555222011-06-08T21:56:49.699-04:002011-06-08T21:56:49.699-04:00ellen - simply. stevenellen - simply. stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-53574729911905894392011-06-08T21:56:34.642-04:002011-06-08T21:56:34.642-04:00jjrod'z, thankyou. i love being able to share ...jjrod'z, thankyou. i love being able to share in the creation of lovely thoughts. stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-28705348892250103312011-06-08T21:56:02.068-04:002011-06-08T21:56:02.068-04:00ruth thankyou. it's interesting how we apply g...ruth thankyou. it's interesting how we apply gender to objects and natural forces, and extend qualities that we ascribe to those genders into the experiencing of the features of those objects and natural forces. i have a bike who is like a brother to me. hmmmm. stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-27752419955786847952011-06-08T21:42:48.334-04:002011-06-08T21:42:48.334-04:00kathleen - always! stevenkathleen - always! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-33642320940796235212011-06-08T21:42:33.129-04:002011-06-08T21:42:33.129-04:00weaver - the petals that have been falling of late...weaver - the petals that have been falling of late make me think of the fruit that's coming! stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-46308135720346051032011-06-08T21:41:32.917-04:002011-06-08T21:41:32.917-04:00terresa, i wish i could answer you but i know the ...terresa, i wish i could answer you but i know the mechanics of how i set up a piece of writing but not much about any other part of it. it has to feel right. that's a hard thing to explain - but you know that i bet. stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-82941043895925945972011-06-08T18:46:21.622-04:002011-06-08T18:46:21.622-04:00Those petals look like confetti after a happy part...Those petals look like confetti after a happy party. :)<br /><br />Thanks for always pointing out the brighter side of life.hopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03306622656461205674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-74909320582804069122011-06-08T10:43:20.450-04:002011-06-08T10:43:20.450-04:00I would guess that you experience countless moment...I would guess that you experience countless moments like the one you captured in this poem and that one part of your process is deciding which one to share. I am also guessing that you have gaggle of readers wanting you to write about your writing process. I know you have written about it before, especially in the comments, but I am hearing your readers clamor for more, more.Dan Gurneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11628603380292404658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-62242337529478846792011-06-08T10:04:48.275-04:002011-06-08T10:04:48.275-04:00Yes, Steven, how do you write these beautifully me...Yes, Steven, how do you write these beautifully merged words and sentiments??? <br />I know that petals and breezes are inspirational in themselves, but ....agujahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15857809123531088629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-85630319828449466242011-06-08T09:21:22.447-04:002011-06-08T09:21:22.447-04:00a gentle breeze.a gentle breeze.ellen abbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00535475792150335186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-9345517585531428272011-06-08T07:57:39.064-04:002011-06-08T07:57:39.064-04:00your gentle mind create gentle thoughts... love it...your gentle mind create gentle thoughts... love it!JJ Roa Rodriguezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501127870785148555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-6061182293257473292011-06-08T07:49:10.622-04:002011-06-08T07:49:10.622-04:00I think the wind is a flirt too, but I call it &qu...I think the wind is a flirt too, but I call it "he." :-)<br /><br />Gorgeous, gentle lines.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14204074161539605133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-6168872430812639322011-06-08T06:42:57.879-04:002011-06-08T06:42:57.879-04:00You must be in love, Steven!!!You must be in love, Steven!!!Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18372015226222285350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-40633150560538270802011-06-08T04:21:00.198-04:002011-06-08T04:21:00.198-04:00Ah - falling petals remind me that the next season...Ah - falling petals remind me that the next season is Autumn. Beautiful words steven.The Weaver of Grasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13947971556343746883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-42248354304272048962011-06-08T00:54:08.647-04:002011-06-08T00:54:08.647-04:00Steven, how do you write like this?
Every thing ...Steven, how do you write like this? <br /><br />Every thing in this poem flows and falls, like the soft panic of bird's wings, soft as the falling of petals.*https://www.blogger.com/profile/06484208765656281917noreply@blogger.com