tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post1961299676431483534..comments2023-10-24T09:29:32.492-04:00Comments on the golden fish: darker laterstevenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-60751145467055428552012-02-19T22:42:46.530-05:002012-02-19T22:42:46.530-05:00When a mistress comes calling why the indecision? ...When a mistress comes calling why the indecision? What is the worst that could happen? Choosing to sit out seems very reasonable but to hesitate and miss an opportunity would be a shame. If only...<br /><br />Moody and thoughtful, I enjoyed it.<br /><br />I'm also loving the cold blue at the top. The color reminds me of a glacier that entered in the alps.Butternut Squashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14703748547994069092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-53066962665867829472012-02-19T11:02:58.705-05:002012-02-19T11:02:58.705-05:00Poignant Steven; ripe with atmosphere and pensive ...Poignant Steven; ripe with atmosphere and pensive thought. I kept reading and saying 'wow' in my mind. I am in awe of this poem ... must read it again!agujahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15857809123531088629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-55040097621288816412012-02-19T10:43:36.843-05:002012-02-19T10:43:36.843-05:00reya - these words you write here feel so like the...reya - these words you write here feel so like the arrow that pierces the target of me . . . stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-41771431386641677642012-02-19T10:42:47.353-05:002012-02-19T10:42:47.353-05:00hey liza . . . hmmmmmm . . . i reach in and try to...hey liza . . . hmmmmmm . . . i reach in and try to get past the skin of this palce and so often it's so thick - like a wall and i can't press through it and all i really want to do is pull what matters back out and say "see here it is . . . look familiar"......... i've been well . . . . stevenstevenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14132104804524716898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-72405267496370401852012-02-19T10:17:17.216-05:002012-02-19T10:17:17.216-05:00Every message I get these days has to do with allo...Every message I get these days has to do with allowing change to complete itself. I like the first stages but towards its conclusion, I begin to grasp, casually at first but then with a weird kind of desperation.<br /><br />It's not rational.Reya Mellickerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13076092659507965666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8767484157936178574.post-21519582884884160622012-02-19T01:33:19.183-05:002012-02-19T01:33:19.183-05:00Ah steven, there is such deep beauty in your words...Ah steven, there is such deep beauty in your words. They are so easy on the spirit, and they often bring me to tears, but in an oh so good way.<br />thank you for that.<br />I hope you have been well.Lisa Ursuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03906234995763166824noreply@blogger.com