Tuesday, May 15, 2012

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i know
that
this shadow is water
this ripple is rock
this whisper is wind
this petal a word
these dry stalks a beginning
these rocks
a history
this tree stump a story
this cloud a song
this thought a colour
this dream a world
this moment
a completion



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7 comments:

  1. Reya MellickerMay 15, 2012 at 7:07 AM

    And now I know these things, too. Thank you.

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  2. stevenMay 15, 2012 at 1:43 PM

    ha - you know all of that and some reya mellicker!!! steven

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  3. PaulineMay 15, 2012 at 4:02 PM

    and vice versa! the water is shadow, the rock a ripple, wind is a whisper, words are petals, etc. This is a truly beautiful bit of poetic inspiration, Steven!

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  4. erinMay 15, 2012 at 9:26 PM

    and in those incredible moments when we are able to recognize this!

    (i like pauline's impulse to turn this upon itself.)

    xo
    erin

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  5. stevenMay 15, 2012 at 9:31 PM

    pauline you tore this apart and brought it to it's rightful place. i thankyou!!!! steven

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  6. stevenMay 15, 2012 at 9:32 PM

    erin - i like where pauline went with this also . . . it feels good to see the mirror looking back!!! steven

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  7. KayMay 16, 2012 at 2:23 AM

    wonderful, wonderful words..esp like 'this thought a colour'
    my thoughts today seem kind of muted pastels..:)
    xx

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