Saturday, February 4, 2012

still


there's a temptation
to fall inside
your fingers
if only to feel them
holding my face


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10 comments:

  1. Sharon LongworthFebruary 4, 2012 at 2:28 AM

    Haven't got the words to dot it justice, but that's gorgeous.

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  2. Sharon LongworthFebruary 4, 2012 at 2:30 AM

    Or "do it" even - see you left me properly wordless...!

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  3. RuthFebruary 4, 2012 at 6:17 AM

    I love the mutuality of this, Steven! To love, and love being loved. And the snow and yarrow (?) illustrate your lines scrumptiously.

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  4. stevenFebruary 4, 2012 at 8:13 AM

    sharon - "dot" "do" ..... no matter! thankyou for your generous comment(s). steven

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  5. stevenFebruary 4, 2012 at 8:15 AM

    ruth - i'm writing about mutuality! yes! the sensation of being inside the experience of nature where there are no conditions ........ steven

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  6. PaulineFebruary 4, 2012 at 8:47 AM

    now that's romantic in the best poetic sense - wouldn't it be amazing to have a reverence like that returned!

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  7. erinFebruary 4, 2012 at 9:22 AM

    it is inside the mutuality of love of person or nature or god where the poignancy resides. this is quiet beautiful, steven.

    xo
    erin

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  8. stevenFebruary 4, 2012 at 9:30 AM

    pauline - i think that nature and the love that conencts all things returns the revernece you have for this place in abundance. steven

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  9. Linda SueFebruary 4, 2012 at 1:58 PM

    That is what is so good about my dog- I can fall into him- we feel each other and there are no expectations or misreading of just wanting to be close.

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  10. UnknownFebruary 4, 2012 at 7:45 PM

    I love all the natural connections.
    It's so tactile and appealing. Thanks for sharing, Steven

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