"let the beauty we love be what we do" rumi
Startling opening metaphor; few lines but much to think on. And Happy New Year!
titus this piece was there as it is presented and it is definitely a fragment but i liked it enough to pop it up here. after i read your comment i wondered if anyone visiting would care to extend it or even finish it?! hmmmm. steven
Very clever Steven! Most adroit! You are always one to amaze in that your poems sweep the arena of variation in theme, compostion and aspect.Finish it? It is complete in itself and not a fragment at all ... those are my thoughts.
a new steven every day? Or the same steven in different colours.Whichever, I like him.
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Startling opening metaphor; few lines but much to think on.
ReplyDeleteAnd Happy New Year!
titus this piece was there as it is presented and it is definitely a fragment but i liked it enough to pop it up here. after i read your comment i wondered if anyone visiting would care to extend it or even finish it?! hmmmm. steven
ReplyDeleteVery clever Steven! Most adroit! You are always one to amaze in that your poems sweep the arena of variation in theme, compostion and aspect.
ReplyDeleteFinish it? It is complete in itself and not a fragment at all ... those are my thoughts.
a new steven every day? Or the same steven in different colours.
ReplyDeleteWhichever, I like him.