Friday, January 27, 2012

let's hope it's slow


is it more
than a clustering
of flesh and bone

a bringing together
of the lines
of us

you my love
the last name
on this dance card

12 comments:

  1. You took me through a universe in a few lines, Steven.

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  2. It's stunning Steven, the way these images, these bits of bone, that are more than bone and your beautiful words come together.

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  3. as it is all so temporary, at least, yes, please, let's let this last.

    i imagine you and your wife together. poems like this are not born of nothing. it is beautiful. your images, perfect illustrations.

    xo
    erin

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  4. Perfection in these images and words steven.

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  5. there's a dance in everything isn't there

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  6. Ohmygoodness. The last name on the dance card. What a thought.

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  7. erin - my heart fluttered . . . steven

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  8. ahhh weaver - i am such the romantic . . . steven

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  9. reya - it comes from a very good place . . . steven

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  10. pauline - the dance dances to the dance . . . steven

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  11. oh jo - well it's as real a thought as i've had gifted to me in twenty one years!!!! steven

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