Monday, July 18, 2011

dusk


cool grey-tongued shadows
lick the violet face of dusk


birds and fish hover
on either side of the water-skin
wrapped in ribbons of moonlight

17 comments:

  1. I have always found dusk magical. With its colors and its timing. A day on the verge of getting over, and time to think of the valuable tomorrow that awaits us. Time for reflections, planning and hoping. And preparing to dream.

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  2. A magical thought, steven.

    There's nothing like dusk (when it's not raining)

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  3. Very poetic - I like the violet face of dusk Steven.

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  4. Stevn, these words are magical and are beautifully phrased.

    Your poetry becomes ever more complete.

    Thank you for your comment on my Sunday Snippet. If you would like a copy of my book, Steven, email me and I will send it as a token of the pleasure your poetry has given me.

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  5. I love to take a walk at twilight. There's something quite magical and otherworldly just after the sun has set.

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  6. Birds and fish in communion with the water-skin between. Way to look closely and imagine, feel yourself in their world.

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  7. The blue of dusk is a blue that is difficult to capture, but you've done so here, hovering, well wrapped.

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  8. hello sg!! i like the way everything seems to slow down at dusk. a gathering together of the day. the birds quieten and the trees still. steven

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  9. ha friko! i like rain any time of the day (or night)! i blame that on growing up in manchester! steven

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  10. weaver - some evenings it's closer to pink but most i see on the very humid days of summer are closer to pale purple with a slight hint of cornflower blue. steven

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  11. aguja - thanks for your very generous offer! i'd e-mail you except that i don't have your e-mail address! steven

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  12. tess - it's interesting to me that light qualities and the place of a moment in a day can affect the way we perceive the relationship we have with the world. steven

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  13. ruth - i wanted to say more about that but the words weren't there. i think i said them in another piece of writing a few months ago. steven

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  14. terresa - it draws down into the earth and pulls away upwards into the sky and we hover at the finest point of the hourglass between the two. steven

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  15. Wow this really has a magical quality to it. I love the phrase 'wrapped in ribbons of moonlight' because not only do you get a beautiful image, but you could almost touch them.

    Great piece.

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  16. spangle thankyou! as i mentioned in an earlier reply to a comment, there was more to this but the words escaped me. steven

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  17. Yes, Steven. You've described it perfectly.

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