Wednesday, November 10, 2010

mid autumn

james thomas watts a forest glade in bettws-y-coed, north wales


falling and tumbling
like sackcloth angels
their faces
no longer turned to the sky

earthbound they glide
on dry-veined wings
eyes wide
mouth’s open
singing
autumn’s plainsong
from branch
to forest floor

i watch their return
to the inside
of the coil
the helix
that stands outside of time
the dance
without a drummer
the coil rewound
from life to rebirth

i see their pursed ochre lips
kissing
the frosted forehead
of autumn’s becoming
as i lose my self
in the eyes
of an ice-gilded pond


edward wilkins waite the end of autumn

12 comments:

  1. singing
    autumn’s plainsong

    Mmmm ... in a nutshell!

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  2. 'sackcloth angels' - I'll carry those words all day now, steven.
    Thanks.

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  3. I'll remember this vision of leaves, and return to it, like the inside of the coil of the helix.

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  4. "i see their pursed ochre lips
    kissing the frosted forehead of autumn’s becoming"

    Pure bliss. Wonderful images, too.

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  5. wow, is that first picture a painting?

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  6. I would love to hear Welsh words spoken someday - the spelling is so intriguing and there are some words I haven't the foggiest how they would sound!

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  7. jinksy - nutshell. hmmmm. perhaps that's what is in it for the squirrels and chipmunks. steven

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  8. titus - you're welcome of course! steven

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  9. ruth - i like to wander back through the golden fish archives for a feel of the time. steven

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  10. willow - i'm so happy to share the pure bliss with you!! steven

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  11. ellen - they are both paintings yes. check the credits underneath each one. google the names. see more and better!!! steven

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  12. golden west - it's a beautiful lyrical language. visit wales and hear it for yourself. steven

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