Thursday, May 13, 2010

an old rock


the morning bloomed
warm and tender

not a soul stirring
anything more than
the life they lived in

in the woods
a somnolent hum
borne not of insects
but the contented
solace
of a clear sky
beaming
great swathes
of golden sunshine
through a sweet young canopy
not yet two weeks old

i sat
in the simplest luxury
and dreamed
slow
day dreams
as shadows drifted
their soft grey fingers
across the moss
of an old rock

18 comments:

  1. Just beautiful Steven
    this is your best piece EVER...

    thank you ...I felt it...I experienced it...

    Happy days

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  2. delwyn - i'm humbled by your generous comment. this piece wrote itself. steven

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  3. That is literally spell binding, Steven. I agree with Delwyn.

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  4. I have a particular passion for moss, Steven. I love the way it comes and goes with the seasons.

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  5. Riveting steven - so real - and so much beauty and truth 'captured' in the reality.

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  6. I am totally there. thanks for transporting me.

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  7. I love rocks. And the way your heart beats, Steven. Thank you.

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  8. You are so right, Steven - one of the greatest luxuries is a simple life.

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  9. Lovely! 'not a soul stirring / anything more than / the life they lived in' is wonderfully ambiguous, at once soothing and disturbing.

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  10. Ah, mossy rocks. I'm in heaven.

    (I finally posted your lovely "crystal in spring" on my sidebar)

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  11. hey barry - spell-binding . . . held in place. a good and magic place. a nice feeling eh my friend! steven

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  12. elisabeth - i too really appreciate, maybe love would be a better word to describe my affection for moss. steven

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  13. bonnie - as real as real can be. there's a layer immediately beneath this and then there's the truth! steven

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  14. ellen i am glad you could come along. really i am. steven

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  15. reya - i love rocks and swo do my kids. this house has them scattered in and around it and so does my classroom. each has a story. my kids at school love to heare the story of their finding and then of their own history. my heart - i have a heart murmur that produces a slightly off the beat beat. one doctor said to me that that explained it all! cool guy. steven

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  16. golden west - simplicty is a tremendous luxury when it is entirely appreciated for what it is - and isn't!! yep. steven

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  17. sould's stir eryl. they stir the life they live in and that's how they become more than they are - well more of what they are. that's why they are here living inside these ridiculous bodies. steven

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  18. mosy rocks willow - warm, soft, green and then also cool under the green. thanks for the link to the manor page!! steven

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